taking the time to not only read Widow Walk but to post your thoughts. I'll have the editor look at the punctuation issue and see what can be done. I think it's worthy of mentioning that all of the novels I've written are written out of the thoughts I have in my head that interest me and so, if some of them seem a little too "simple" it's really a reflection of where my mind is. I write to entertain myself as much as a reader. That's why boats show up in almost everything I've ever written. If I couldn't be on a boat at that time then, by golly I could be sailing in my mind...on a lot nicer boat in a place with warm clear water and palm trees. Thanks again for your time and thoughts.