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• Here I sit in Ensenada after a combination of 18 days
  • One needs to read this with a chart or map of Baja in front of you.
  • Um...nice story but...could use a few more paragraph indents or breaks to make more readable...
    • Thanks for the critique. If I ever write something
      • Nothing wrong with the literary aspects at all. Almost zero paragraph breaks make is very hard to read.
  • Here, for folks that want paragraph breaks, try this.
    • Good Job!
    • On the contrary, it reads just fine.
      • Glad I could help...