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Here, for folks that want paragraph breaks, try this.
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Here I sit in Ensenada after a combination of 18 days
One needs to read this with a chart or map of Baja in front of you.
Um...nice story but...could use a few more paragraph indents or breaks to make more readable...
Thanks for the critique. If I ever write something
Nothing wrong with the literary aspects at all. Almost zero paragraph breaks make is very hard to read.
Here, for folks that want paragraph breaks, try this.
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On the contrary, it reads just fine.
Glad I could help...
