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Nothing wrong with the literary aspects at all. Almost zero paragraph breaks make is very hard to read. 
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- Here I sit in Ensenada after a combination of 18 days
- One needs to read this with a chart or map of Baja in front of you.
- Um...nice story but...could use a few more paragraph indents or breaks to make more readable...
- Thanks for the critique. If I ever write something
- Nothing wrong with the literary aspects at all. Almost zero paragraph breaks make is very hard to read.
- Nothing wrong with the literary aspects at all. Almost zero paragraph breaks make is very hard to read.
- Thanks for the critique. If I ever write something
- Here, for folks that want paragraph breaks, try this.